8 comments

  • _superposition_ 0 minutes ago
    This is great advice. I suck at writing, usually getting started is the hardest part. Appreciate the blazed trail.
  • TaLiTr 1 hour ago
    > “You should have failed this class. I’m going to make accommodations so that no student can pass next semester the same way you did.”

    > This is what my Ancient History II professor told me when my group and I got our final group project essay handed out.

    What a terrible, hack of a teacher. If you've ever said something like that to a student, quit your job. Those people are the reason academia is such a miserable experience for so many.

    • DanielVZ 1 hour ago
      Yep. The main reason I didn't further pursue History academia was that it was too much of a monoculture with a bit of nepotism sparkled all over it. Not to discard everyone there of course; there were some awesome courses and faculty. But there's no way I was going to dedicate my life to such environment with so little in return for it.
    • pessimizer 1 hour ago
      Nah, the teacher was just wrong about the facts. If they had been right about the facts, there's nothing wrong with saying that imo. The reality was that it was the partner who should have gotten that lecture rather than the author.

      So I'd say that you shouldn't say that if you're relying on your own feelings and impressions to judge facts not in evidence, because your instincts may be wrong. They may even be racist or sexist (i.e. something that the person you're maligning has to deal with constantly), instead of in this case when it was just a weakness for ass-kissers.

      Too many times somebody else got a good grade from my work. I don't begrudge them the grade because I don't care when other people get nice things for free (I love it when me or my friends get nice things for free), but they certainly had no knowledge in what had been taught in the class they just got a B in.

      > Those people are the reason academia is such a miserable experience for so many.

      School isn't a therapy session or entertainment. If it's a miserable experience and you come out smart, it's 1000x better than if its a wonderful experience and you come out dumb.

      • tikhonj 47 minutes ago
        That's a big if. I've learned far more from settings and courses I enjoyed than from ones I hated. I expect the causation flowed in both directions, and there's no way I'm unique in that regard.
      • TaLiTr 31 minutes ago
        > So I'd say that you shouldn't say that if you're relying on your own feelings and impressions to judge facts not in evidence, because your instincts may be wrong.

        That's exactly my point. That teacher didn't have any facts, they just decided someone was a slacker based on vibes and used that bias to single them out. And presumably would go on to add systems to allow them to persecute others they deem to be slackers.

        > School isn't a therapy session or entertainment. If it's a miserable experience and you come out smart, it's 1000x better than if its a wonderful experience and you come out dumb.

        As someone who gets told he's smart somewhat regularly by his peers, and had a school mandated therapist because they thought he was a suicide risk, I believe that's a statement that needs a citation.

        In any case they're not mutually exclusive, you can have an education system that works without grinding people down into lifelong anxiety disorders.

        • gowld 14 minutes ago
          > And presumably would go on to add systems to allow them to persecute others they deem to be slackers.

          According to the story (which seemed to lack a "trunk"), the proposed system was individual essays.

          • tolerance 3 minutes ago
            > The structure of this post is a bit of a miss for me. Sorry about that. I wanted to write a short post about writing non-fiction but it turned out to be a bit longer than expected and I need to get to work now. I hope you enjoyed it.

            It almost reads like the author climbed the tree to shake its branches and content himself with whatever dropped. Which in this case is fine by me.

  • tolerance 5 minutes ago
    This is good blogging right here and sound advice for all writers on the web to follow.

    But I'm a little disappointed that one of those ink blot looking circles (preferably the big one on the left) did not lead back to the home page.

    • DanielVZ 4 minutes ago
      OHHH THAT'S SUCH A GOOD IDEA. I'm going to add some interactivity to the circles
  • navane 59 minutes ago
    The assignment was a shared essay? Written together? And then the prof was, oh no a free loader?
  • thex10 1 hour ago
    This format probably resonates with somebody. But I learned how to write outlines in school and that has worked for me.
  • firefoxd 1 hour ago
    I like the trunk analogy, the branches can only grow so much before the tip the entire tree over.

    I usually use the example of a blue sky. Write that the sky is blue. That's it. Simple yet the temptations to paint the sky with clouds, trees, and emotions is hard to resist. Always come back to the writing, and endure that you clearly wrote that the sky is just blue.

  • horitechsolutio 1 hour ago
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  • mrosenbjerg 3 hours ago
    it’s dead Jim